TED Talk Rev. Reflection

For the Ted Talk, the class had peer revisions which would allow us to reflect on how and what we did wrong, or if anything needed changing in our videos. The class exchanged various tips and ideas on how to improve our Ted Talks, such as developing more on an idea or adding another one. For these revisions, I did not receive many corrections from my peers, which I think proves the hard work and dedication which I put into this project. While making the Ted Talk video, I wanted to give my full effort in order to show myself that I could, something which has  clearly paid off in the end. Although my classmates did not offer many corrections, I went ahead and added my sources to the Talk, given that it was something that had caused some trouble in the past. Because of this small adjustment, I believe that the revised Ted Talk video is fully complete, and that there is no need to add anything else. I feel like I did a good job on the Ted Talk, not only on the video of the Talk but also on the topic because it was very controversial. This controversy was something that, in my opinion, was missing on some of my classmate's Ted Talks; this is important because there is no argument if it is about something with a universal agreement or where there are no real sides of the discussion.